Literary Hook: A poem inspired by a winter scene

Christine Swanberg

By Christine Swanberg
Author and Poet

Editor’s note: In the Jan. 9-15 “Literary Hook,” the second line of the “Unwinding the Old Year” poem should have read as follows: “mixed blessings hanging from your tree,”. The Rock River Times regrets the error.

One of my New Year’s resolutions is to write sonnets. I enjoy working with the sonnet because its form gives you boundaries: 14 lines, 10 syllables per line, every other line rhymed, ending in a rhymed couplet.

The poem was inspired from a view from the second floor. The sun looked like a tree coming out of the horizon with an odd-pointed shape, although it was actually setting. Winter scenes can inspire poems if you let them.

Winter Sonnet

Magenta sunset points like a pine tree

from the corner of my bedroom window.

All is quiet here this January.

Kitty snuggles up against my pillow.

Dusk brings beauty even in the winter

when stars begin to hang like icicles.

The indigo night begins to enter

and softly from its corner tickles

Venus and Saturn near the ringed moon.

Come O winter night to bless our slumber.

From your vast horizon may silence croon.

Let our dear dreams serve to unencumber.

O chilly winter rise and cast your spell.

In your long night of perfect sleep we dwell.

Christine Swanberg is a local author and poet. She received the Lawrence E. Gloyd Community Impact Award at the 2012 Rockford Area Arts Council State of the Arts Awards.

From the Feb. 20-26, 2013, issue

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